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Welcome to the Wiki for our 1st period Comm Arts Class LIGHT BLUE PAGE If you are on this page, you are using the light blue camera for this project. Below you will post your peer reviews for the PSA projects that are being evaluated.

To begin, type the name of the project that you are watching and type your feedback. When you move to the next project, you will go to the light blue page and continue by evaluating the next group's project. An example is below:

October 14, 2010 __Lynda, John and Jamey's project: __ Intro-weak, did not grab my interest, don't start with a talking reporter, boring Shaky camera work, use a tripod the message was unclear, why are the kids running around? Audio: the music is blaring under the parking lot scene and we can't understand the conversations Editing: sloppy, announcement is spelled wrong, needs transitions General: we can't follow the storyline, it needs to be revised, it is not a PSA, random clips

BE SURE TO SAVE YOUR POST before you move to the next computer!

October 28th, 2010

Jake, James Alicia, and B. Waller
 * don't really understand the concept
 * didn't like the transitions and some of the music
 * we liked the responsibility poster

Amanda, Clare, and Ationna
 * good concept
 * try to use someone other than Dre
 * you could have brought the natural sound up so we could here the talking
 * it was very short
 * liked the music

Katie, Izzy, and Jaclyn
 * you could have showed respect in a different way, just not the definition
 * it repeats a lot
 * the natural sound wasn't very loud

Shauna, Joe, and Eric

Paxton, Melissa, and Danielle Benden, Bradley, and Mike Dakota
 * music still plays in at the end
 * the title screen after eric is disrespectful was long
 * when filming eric, he keeps looking at the camera
 * funny
 * good music
 * good idea
 * could have stopped the music at the end
 * good idea
 * good transitions
 * very good music
 * good idea
 * very long
 * use someone other than Dre
 * couldnt really hear mike meekins
 * good clips from the pep rally
 * it's very short