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Welcome to the Wiki for our 1st period Comm Arts Class RED PAGE If you are on this page, you are using the red camera for this project. Below you will post your peer reviews for the PSA projects that are being evaluated.

To begin, type the name of the project that you are watching and type your feedback. When you move to the next project, you will go to the red page and continue by evaluating the next group's project. **An example is below:**

October 14, 2010 __Lynda, John and Jamey's project: __ Intro-weak, did not grab my interest, don't start with a talking reporter, boring Shaky camera work, use a tripod the message was unclear, why are the kids running around? Audio: the music is blaring under the parking lot scene and we can't understand the conversations Editing: sloppy, announcement is spelled wrong, needs transitions General: we can't follow the storyline, it needs to be revised, it is not a PSA, random clips

BE SURE TO SAVE your post before you move to the next computer!

October 28, 2010 Joe, Eric, Shauna project: you need music credits you should use a voice over for your voices cut the music at the end to fit your video overall it was a very good concept and easy to fallow good job!

October 28, 2010 Melissa, Paxton, Danielle titles are really fast its hard to hear voices split and cut the audio at the end of your video put music credits in

October 28, 2010 Mike, Brenden and Bradley Thought it was slightly confusing, but overall a really good video with an original concept (chalkboard) you guys need music credits

October 28, 2010 Dakota we liked that you used the homecoming events in your video you should cut the screams at the end to fit your video you should have underclassman to tie the school together good job its really good overall

October 28, 2010 Lauren, Catherine, Jasmine it was good that you used your group members in your video shot quality was really good music credits

October 28, 2010 Alicia, James, Jake music credits it was easy to fallow good concept titles are good using different angles with the camera was good i liked the banner with Responsibility on it.

October 28, 2010 Claire, Ationna, Amanda good color choice for titles and the achievement picture was catchy good music choice liked that the sports people were in uniform, but can't really hear dre too well