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Welcome to the Wiki for our 1st period Comm Arts Class WHITE PAGE If you are on this page, you are using the white camera for this project. Below you will post your peer reviews for the PSA projects that are being evaluated.

To begin, type the name of the project that you are watching and type your feedback. When you move to the next project, you will go to the white page and continue by evaluating the next group's project. An example is below:

October 14, 2010 __Lynda, John and Jamey's project: __ Intro-weak, did not grab my interest, don't start with a talking reporter, boring Shaky camera work, use a tripod the message was unclear, why are the kids running around? Audio: the music is blaring under the parking lot scene and we can't understand the conversations Editing: sloppy, announcement is spelled wrong, needs transitions General: we can't follow the storyline, it needs to be revised, it is not a PSA, random clips   Danielle, paxton, and melissa October 28, 2010 you need to remove the shot of the 2 people between the credits good audio good camera angles good acting a little confused about what it was about   Mike, brad, and brendan october 28, 2010 felt confused about what the video was about couldn't understand what they were saying at times The one shot on mike you couldn't see his face because of the sun had some good camera angles needed more natural sound instead of music good idea with righting on the board but i think it could have been done better with better camera angles   Dakota October 28, 2010 Really short Used another person's video Felt confused  Lauren, catherine, and jasmine october 28, 2010 good audio good camera angles Thought it got the point across well maybe could use more music   James, Jake, and Alicia October 28, 2010 got the point across clearly kept the viewers attention good audio good effects and camera angles good length good acting  Clare, Ationna, and Amanda October 28, 2010 was short got the point across well easy to understand good audio ends abruptly after the credits good transitions Katie, Jaclyn, and Izzy October 28, 2010 the credits go too fast was not able to read them. good and affective way to get the point across Mr. Howard's shot is too long and drawn out. could have used a more original song. could be longer