TEAL+PAGE

Welcome to the Wiki for our 1st period Comm Arts Class TEAL PAGE If you are on this page, you are using the teal camera for this project. Below you will post your peer reviews for the PSA projects that are being evaluated.

To begin, type the name of the project that you are watching and type your feedback. When you move to the next project, you will go to the teal page and continue by evaluating the next group's project. An example is below:

October 14, 2010 __Lynda, John and Jamey's project: __ Intro-weak, did not grab my interest, don't start with a talking reporter, boring Shaky camera work, use a tripod the message was unclear, why are the kids running around? Audio: the music is blaring under the parking lot scene and we can't understand the conversations Editing: sloppy, announcement is spelled wrong, needs transitions General: we can't follow the storyline, it needs to be revised, it is not a PSA, random clips

BE SURE TO SAVE YOUR POST before you move to the next computer!

october 28 dakota short should be slowed down there should be a point in the movie add music.

jasmine lauren catheran good just add some music good camera angles funny

james alycia b-wall jake music in the begging doesn't fit has a good point could be alittle shorter overall good job

clare antionna and amanda short and to the point has a good suprise factor at the end everything goes well together

izzy kate jaklyin to much talking dictionary was good could be shorter

joe eric and shunna could be shorter the staying awake seen could be better cameras good its funny

danielle paxton mellissa could be alittle longer should show her trying to stop being late feels like it lacks and ending still has a good point and message