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Welcome to the Wiki for our 1st period Comm Arts Class LIGHT PINK PAGE If you are on this page, you are using the pink camera for this project. Below you will post your peer reviews for the PSA projects that are being evaluated.

To begin, type the name of the project that you are watching and type your feedback. When you move to the next project, you will go to the pink page and continue by evaluating the next group's project. An example is below:

October 14, 2010 __Lynda, John and Jamey's project: __ Intro-weak, did not grab my interest, don't start with a talking reporter, boring Shaky camera work, use a tripod the message was unclear, why are the kids running around? Audio: the music is blaring under the parking lot scene and we can't understand the conversations Editing: sloppy, announcement is spelled wrong, needs transitions General: we can't follow the storyline, it needs to be revised, it is not a PSA, random clips

BE SURE TO SAVE YOUR POST before you move to the next computer!

Oct. 28th amanda, clare, ationna

-Shaky Camera work -Music Loud -Good Quality of taping -Nice angles used, Doms shot -Kind of Hard to understand -Grammar was correct -Fade Music out at the end

oct 28 jaclyn kate and izzy

- text at end was fast - mr howard spoke for a long time - 1st speaker was too soft - music was loud - message was good and easy to understand - doesnt grab attention - grammar was good - boring camera angles

Oct 28th Joe, Eric, shauna -Joe is hard to Hear -Music plays for too long after credits -Didn't understand first scene -didn't grab my attention -Good Message -Quality of video was good -Grammar was correct

0ct. 28th Danielle Paxton Melissa -Short -Good Message -Hard to hear ms. woods when she talks -Good Camera Angles -Nice Transitions -Music can be ended at the emd of video -Music was over powering speakers

0ct 28th Mike Brad Brendan

-Clear Message -Hard to understand, Dre and Mike - Audio was good, too Loud at points -shaky camera -good editing -Nice Camera Angles -like the part with E.J. -Grammar was correct

Oct 28 dakota

- good message easy to understand decatur pride - very short - robert made it funny but loud - good camera angles from stadium - use of homecoming pep rally was good -Could add music -Screaming in background was good

0ct 28 Lauren Catherine Jasmine -Hard to hear -Good Message -Too long -Audio was clear and good -Don't know what dakota and kyle are talking about until late in conversation -Editing was good - Teacher was hard to understand in beggining -Grammar was correct Good angles