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Welcome to the Wiki for our 1st period Comm Arts Class DARK PINK PAGE If you are on this page, you are using the dark pink camera for this project. Below you will post your peer reviews for the PSA projects that are being evaluated.

To begin, type the name of the project that you are watching and type your feedback. When you move to the next project, you will go to the dark pink page and continue by evaluating the next group's project. An example is below:

October 14, 2010 __Lynda, John and Jamey's project: __ Intro-weak, did not grab my interest, don't start with a talking reporter, boring Shaky camera work, use a tripod the message was unclear, why are the kids running around? Audio: the music is blaring under the parking lot scene and we can't understand the conversations Editing: sloppy, announcement is spelled wrong, needs transitions General: we can't follow the storyline, it needs to be revised, it is not a PSA, random clips

BE SURE TO SAVE YOUR POST before you move to the next computer!

October 28. 2010 Katie Jaclyn Izzy

The typed words went too fast to read them cant hear the people talking cause the music is louder than the voices Good idea

October 28, 2010 Joe Shauna Eric

Couldnt hear joe in the begining Girl started laughing after she talked music kept going when the video ended Great idea for PSA

October 28, 2010 Melissa Pax Dani

should have cut music at the end so it didnt keep playing Audio is low Words went too fast felt like there should have been more at the end with a little more editing would be a great video! Good idea for PSA

October 28, 2010 Mike Brendan Brad

Nice video Cant hear Dre Really good concept Like chalkboard idea

October 28, 2010 Dakota

Good editing Good idea Short in a good way Cant hear music

October 28, 2010 Lauren Catherine Jasmine

Audio was way too low Good idea! Lots of talking funny in a way, but serious use someone other than kyle

October 28, 2010 James Jake Alicia

Like the concept Great video Audio was nice