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Welcome to the Wiki for our 1st period Comm Arts Class BLUE PAGE If you are on this page, you are using the blue camera for this project. Below you will post your peer reviews for the PSA projects that are being evaluated.

To begin, type the name of the project that you are watching and type your feedback. When you move to the next project, you will go to the blue page and continue by evaluating the next group's project. An example is below:

October 14, 2010 __Lynda, John and Jamey's project: __ Intro-weak, did not grab my interest, don't start with a talking reporter, boring Shaky camera work, use a tripod the message was unclear, why are the kids running around? Audio: the music is blaring under the parking lot scene and we can't understand the conversations Editing: sloppy, announcement is spelled wrong, needs transitions General: we can't follow the storyline, it needs to be revised, it is not a PSA, random clips

BE SURE TO SAVE YOUR POST before you move to the next computer!

October 28

Brendan, Bradley, and Mike Excellent attention grabber Good camera angles Editing was done well Message was clear

Dakota Short Good footage Not a clear message Camera Angles varied

Jasmine Lauren, and Catherine Clear message Got our attention right away Smacking butt is inappropriate Editing was done well, good transitions

James, Alicia, Jake, and Brendan Waller Clear message Random hand stopping him from running into a truck Good editing Liked how the responsibility rubbed off on others in the video

Amanda, Clare, and Ationna Short Message could be a little clearer Not much of an attention grabber Good angle shots

Jaclyn, Katie, and Izzy Boring Short Did not grab our attentions Only interviews

Joe, Eric, and Shauna Clear message Good Attention Grabber Didn't understand what Joe said in the beginning Good Camera Angles