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Welcome to the Wiki for our 1st period Comm Arts Class YELLOW PAGE If you are on this page, you are using the yellow camera for this project. Below you will post your peer reviews for the PSA projects that are being evaluated.

To begin, type the name of the project that you are watching and type your feedback. When you move to the next project, you will go to the yellow page and continue by evaluating the next group's project. An example is below:

October 14, 2010 __Lynda, John and Jamey's project: __ Intro-weak, did not grab my interest, don't start with a talking reporter, boring Shaky camera work, use a tripod the message was unclear, why are the kids running around? Audio: the music is blaring under the parking lot scene and we can't understand the conversations Editing: sloppy, announcement is spelled wrong, needs transitions General: we can't follow the storyline, it needs to be revised, it is not a PSA, random clips

BE SURE TO SAVE YOUR POSTS before you move to the next computer!

oct, 28th

-jasmine catherine and lauren

needs more music but the video does show respect

-jake blazer

music doesnt make sense

needs a point to the video

less transitions

-amanda ationna clare

needs to show what its talking about

sounds like random music

less black screens

-izzy katie doesnt need the dictionary

its boring with the same question to everyone

-joe

too long for a psa

cant here the actors talking clear either

the shot are also shaky

-mike brenden bradly too long the same song gets old

the point of the psa is clear though